Geek Squad Feels Your Pain
August 16, 2010
Kudos to Geek Squad who approved a funny set of print ads that hits home to just about anyone who has ever used a computer. The creative comes from the Miami Ad School in Madrid, Spain.
I laughed out loud when I saw these and could completely relate. I also love Victor Javier Blanco’s brilliant sub-copy, “Fixed before it gets nasty.” I love simple but incredibly effective ads!



Which one of the above ads is you? I have to admit that I’m a #1.
Source: Adgoodness
Improve Your Copywriting with the Red Pen Rule
August 5, 2010
In my book, Kick-ass Copywriting in 10 Easy Steps, I write about how a little trick I call the Red Pen Rule can help you make your marketing copy more effective and more successful.
This week, I wrote an overview of the Red Pen Rule on Entrepreneur.com. Here’s a snippet to give you an idea of what’s included in the article and discussed in greater detail in my book.
“You don’t ever want consumers to read or listen to your ad or marketing piece and think, “Hurry up and get to the point.” Instead, keep your messages short, sweet and succinct, and your results will prove that the red pen rule works.”
You can follow the link to read the complete article, called The Red Pen Rule for Marketing Copy.
Weekly Wrap up – Marketing and Branding
March 26, 2010
Check out Susan Gunelius’ articles and posts published across the Web this week:
Corporate Branding and Marketing
- Branding from Within: The Importance of Internal Brand Building
- Brands Really Can Connect with Consumers through Online Video Ads
- Apple and Google – Friends or Foes?
Small Business Branding and Marketing
- 20 Questions to Ask and Requirements to Define before You Hire a Business Blogger
- 6 Twitter Apps to Track Your Twitter Performance
Copywriting
How to Create a Sense of Urgency in Marketing Messages
March 25, 2010
I write about the topic of creating a sense of urgency and motivating consumers to action through your copywriting extensively in my book for small business owners and beginner copywriters, Kick-ass Copywriting in 10 Easy Steps, where I explain that crafting effective calls to action is a talent that you can learn.
My newest article on Entrepreneur.com gives 3 useful tips to help you create a sense of urgency in your marketing messages. You can follow the link to get all the details: 3 Ways to Move Customers to Action.
10 Common and Effective Emotional Triggers to Boost Your Copywriting
March 3, 2010
My latest article for Entrepreneur.com has been published. This time, I explain how appealing to consumers’ emotional triggers can make your copywriting more effective, which is something I go into in greater detail in my book, Kick-ass Copywriting in 10 Easy Steps.
You can follow the link to read my article on the Entrepreneur website: 10 Common and Effective Emotional Triggers.
PETA Launches Distasteful Tiger Woods Ad
February 25, 2010
I’ve written about my disliking of PETA’s marketing strategies in the past (you can read those posts here, here and here). This week, PETA launched a new billboard ad that truly takes the cake in terms of being downright distasteful.
Unless you’ve been living under a rock, you’ve probably heard about Tiger Woods’ infidelity. PETA seems to have decided that Tiger Woods’ family problems is the perfect fodder for a new billboard, which will be rolled out in Tiger’s own town, Windermere, Florida right where he, his wife, and his children (albeit to young to read, but that’s not really the point) can see it. You can check it out below.
According to Virginia Fort, a PETA campaigner involved in the ad’s creation, the billboard ad is, “a fun, tongue-in-cheek approach. … We’re sure Tiger will appreciate our attempt — from a story that’s distracted the world and followed Tiger — to turn it into something positive for little tigers.” (via The Orlando Sentinel)
I think that’s the worst attempt at justification I’ve heard in a long time. I wonder if Tiger Woods will sue, and I wonder how many people PETA will offend with this “tongue-in-cheek” ad. What do you think?
5 Most Listened to Podcasts in 2009
December 1, 2009
Anna Farmery of The Engaging Brand blog and podcast published a list of the 5 most listened to podcasts that she hosted in 2009, and I’m happy to announce that one of the podcasts that I particpated in with Anna ranked at the top of the list.
In this particular podcast, I spoke with Anna about my book, Kick-ass Copywriting in 10 Easy Steps, and the craft of creating compelling and effective marketing communications. You can listen to my podcast here.
Check out the list of the top 5 podcasts on The Engaging Brand in 2009 below. There are some great discussions!
- Susan Gunelius with Tips on Business Writing
- Sydney Finkelstein on Why Good Leaders Make Bad Decisions
- Costas Kataras on Are we facing the death of the brand
- Roz Savage on Facing the Fear
- Roy Spence on Its not what you sell
Also, check out Anna’s blog for a list of the top 5 podcasts on The Engaging Brand of all time for more great conversations!
10 Reasons Your Marketing Messages Stink
November 25, 2009
My latest article is live on Entrepreneur.com. It’s called 10 Reasons Your Marketing Messages Stink, and I look at the craft of writing effective copy from a different perspective than you might be used to.
You can check it out here.
What do you think is the main reason marketing copy is ineffective? Leave a comment and share your thoughts!
Mercedes E-Class Ad Copy – ‘Butt’ of Critics’ Jokes
October 30, 2009
One of the points I stress in my book, Kick-ass Copywriting in 10 Easy Steps, is the importance of writing copy that speaks to your target audience. If your audience doesn’t ‘get’ your copy or it doesn’t speak directly to them in a language they understand, appreciate, and relate to, then your ad won’t drive the sales you need from it. Case in point — the new Mercedes E-Class print ads shown below.
Ad #1 Copy Reads: “Superfect. The E-Class Coupe. It deserves a whole new language.”

Ad #2 Copy Reads: “Fabuttractive. The E-Class Coupe. It deserves a whole new language.”

The problems with this copy are two-fold:
First, how many Mercedes customers would be motivated by the pre-teen, Valley Girl (okay, I’m dating myself there) language used in this copy? Who is the target audience for these ads? How many of them would be positively influenced by the word “superfect” or “fabuttastic”? And would they want to be associated with a product and brand that is linked to those words? It’s doubtful.
Second, the glaring inclusion of ‘butt’ within the word ‘fabuttastic’ is hard not to notice. It’s almost laughable and is a great example of another point I make in my book – always show your copy to many people before you approve it. While the creative team behind this ad may not have noticed the word-within-a-word subliminal message, many advertising critics have. I don’t think many brands like Mercedes want to see the word ‘butt’ in such close proximity to their products and brands.
I’m just saying.
Create Loyal Brand Advocates – 7 Steps to Advertising Success
August 13, 2009
My latest article on Entrepreneur.com is called Create Loyal Brand Advocates – 7 Steps to Advertising Success.
In the article, I discuss the seven steps that businesses need to understand and follow in order to develop a long term, successful brand building strategy supported by effective marketing communications. Follow the link above to read the complete article.
Read more marketing and branding articles by Susan Gunelius.





